October Girl

**laughs and giggles** yes!!! :) I read the top wher eit said short story and my twin said "there's nothing short about it" lol

oooh I like this :)

CAT!!! *pounces** Well just to tell you I love this your gonna win I'm sure of it, it's perfect. Nice pic by the way :) -Max

oooh!!! I want more!!!!

whoa ah.... this is well..... long.... hmm.....

hello ^_^ nice poem now all you have to do is write a poem called Goodbye.

I liked this.... ALOT and I love your avvie :) -Max

i think it should be called Together, but that's just me, great poem keep working on it -Max

I L.O.V.E this poem!!!! lol but anyways I like this oem because you weren't too wordy but it still caught on :]] it was romantic and depressing at the same ...

ooooh Yoyo that was great, and yet so true that was like the coolest poem on the face of the earth lol. I miss chatting with you!!! But that was ...

I've read it :]] but I don't like the 2nd book, I have the 3rd book but I haven't got around to reading it yet :lol: -Max

Hmm, really sad for the bugs :[ but great imagination.

I like it, really it's actually very interesting and the title drew me in, great job. I think this will be fine for a contest :]] wish I could be ...

Hmm, this is kind of depressing but I don't see how it's suicide. Mabye you want to explain how it is? I think there's a story behind it. I would ...

This story is well, pretty good ^_^ I love your avvie by the way. The title really drew me in, great job two thumbs up :lol: -Max